Wrote a Senryu poem on the prompt “Impression”. A Senryu like a Haiku follows 3 lines of 5-7-5 syllables but focuses on humans and not on nature.
Was it what you said,
Was it what you did, but you-
Left behind a mark.
Was it how you looked?
Or was it your voice, that I-
Just could not erase.
Or was it a touch,
So strong, so gentle, made an-
Indelible Impression.
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beautifully said 🙂
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Thank you Kate😊
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a pleasure … have unfollowed most as I go off air within the week but hope to read more of yours when I return in December 🙂
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Wow that’s a long break. Have a good one! Will miss you. Look forward to hearing from you in December😊
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may have an opportunity to make a couple of posts but will turn my comments off 🙂
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Lovely use of the prompt 🙂
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Thank you so much. You made my day😊
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Beautiful write, loved every word… Wow ❤
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Thanks Preethi. It’s been a long time.
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Short, Crispy n Sweet. Loved it.
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Thank you and welcome back after a long time😊
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Every line is so lovable and so felt 😍
In awe of it 😍
Amazingly titled 😅
Do check my world of blogs too 😃
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Thank you. I am glad you loved it.😊 Will definitely check out your blog too.
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