Creative Writing Poetry

I’m sore! I can write no more!



My shoulders are aching

And so is my skull. I’m lying

on the bed

With my hands behind my head.


My neck feels like its gonna give away

God! What a price I must pay

For this madness

That’s caused me this soreness!


A zillion thoughts

Brewing; must be attended to, before it rots

Like stallions – galloping by the sea

Their manes flying, wild and free


Atoms bumping into one another

On a narrow highway; Oh! what a terrible bother!

I close my eyes and wish

If only there was a way – swish!


That they could be captured

And caged

in the pages, of this diary

that lies in wait, beside me.


I focus – the power of my mind being tested

‘Go, go’ I say, ‘I order you with the power vested

in me.’ And then, I look –

Nothing! The book-


Lies frozen, by my side

Opened wide




My shoulders are aching

I can do no more writing

My hands behind my head

I lie still on my bed


It’s past mid-night

I turn off the light

And put them to bed – these untamed horses,

And call it a day, stopping these obnoxious verses!

sore1  😉


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About Smitha V

A banker by profession, a blogger by choice, a poet by accident and an artist at heart, I believe life with its myriad lessons makes us better people At 'EUNOIA,' you'll get a taste of my poetry, art, writing and generally all things that spell my journey through life. Welcome to my world!

22 comments on “I’m sore! I can write no more!

  1. You are an inspiration, you can’t be sore
    If you write no more, many will get bored
    So please fight back and resume writing more
    And instill awe in the people with your mesmerizing lore.. 😊


  2. Very nicely done! Great images.

    Liked by 1 person

  3. glad the pains are gone … I’m pretty sure he may have meant mental or emotional agony 🙂
    But you wrote it so skilfully 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Wow awesome and it is really good to be writing when there is pain and suffering to let go, Smitha. Nice poem.

    Liked by 1 person

  5. I hope your aches and pains go away, soon.
    Well done on the poem.
    I bet Ernest Hemingway would also say bravo.
    BTW he is one of my favorite authors.
    Be well and rest easy

    Liked by 1 person

    • Thank you Margie for the warm encouragement❤. That’s very sweet of you. I wrote this poem a few days ago and posted it now when the pains left. I wonder if he meant ‘physical pain’ though🙂.

      Liked by 2 people

      • You are most welcome, Smitha ❤
        It’s probably more likely Hemingway was talking about mental pain even though he did suffer physical aliments as well.


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